Question

【題目】書面表達

為深入開展“解放思想，改進作風，奮發(fā)有為，創(chuàng)先爭優(yōu)”主題教育實踐活動，學校正在開展“創(chuàng)建文明班級”活動，請根據(jù)下表的內(nèi)容，以“A Meaningful Activity”為題，向報社投稿，介紹活動有關的情況。

主題	告別陋習，握手文明
目的	根除亂扔、亂吐、亂畫、吸煙、喝酒等現(xiàn)象； 提倡穿校服、講禮貌。
內(nèi)容	舉辦圖片展，進行先進班級評比（環(huán)境和行為）等。

要求：1、必須包括提示內(nèi)容，可以適當發(fā)揮；2、詞數(shù)：70 - 90；

3、參考詞匯：文明 civilization; 校園 campus; 告別陋習，握手文明 “Get rid of Bad Habits and Greet Civilization”

A Meaningful Activity

Answer 1

【答案】

Our school has now started the activity of "build civilized classes". The topic is “Get Rid of Bad Habits and Greet Civilization”.

We can still see some bad habits in our school. Some students throw rubbish everywhere or spit in public. Some even get into bad habits，such as smoking and drinking. We hope the students break away from these bad habits. We advise the students to wear their uniform and be polite to others. During the activity, we have held a picture show, a competition between classes for better environment and behavior, and so on.

We all hope that we’ll build each class into a civilized one and our campus into a beautiful place.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹教育實踐活動的內(nèi)容。寫作中注意寫明活動的主題、目的及內(nèi)容。注意不能遺漏提示中的要點。結合材料可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意主謂一致問題，及人稱和固定詞組的用法。

【亮點說明】1. 上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。運用所給提示詞，語言通俗易懂，有號召力。

2.句式簡單，言簡意賅。固定詞組in public./break away/ advise sb to do/ sth./ be polite to /and so on./賓語從句We hope the students break away from these bad habits./ We all hope that we’ll build each class into a civilized one and our campus into a beautiful place. 3.注意適當使用連詞，smoking and drinking./ wear their uniform and be polite to others./ into a civilized one and our campus into a beautiful place.