Question

1．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的中文提示寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文．
（1）Tom是一個(gè)七年級(jí)的學(xué)生，他聰明，有禮貌．他的老師和同學(xué)們很喜歡他．
（2）他最喜歡的節(jié)日是春節(jié)．因?yàn)樗�可以吃很多美味食物，還可以得到很多的紅包．
（3）但是，他知道，吃太多對(duì)健康不利．
（4）今年春節(jié)，他想少吃點(diǎn)，多鍛煉．他想把他的零花錢捐給貧困地區(qū)的孩子們．
要求：（1）字?jǐn)?shù)：70個(gè)左右，開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
（2）內(nèi)容必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不得遺漏！
（3）參考詞匯：零花錢：pocket money  春節(jié)：Chinese New Year
Tom is a Grade 7student．Tom is a Grade 7 student．He is clever and polite．His teachers and his classmates like him very much．His favourite festival is Chinese New Year．
Because he can eat a lot of delicious food，he can get many red packets，too．But he knows eating too much is bad for his health．This Chinese New Year，
he wants to eat less and exercise more．He wants to donate his pocket money to the children in poor areas．
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Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
But he knows①②eating too much is bad for his health但是他知道吃太多對(duì)健康不好．
①know后是省略了that的賓語(yǔ)從句．
②動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)做主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)．
【高分句型二】
He wants to donate his pocket money to the children in poor areas他想將零用錢捐給貧困地區(qū)的孩子．
介詞短語(yǔ)in poor areas做后置定語(yǔ)，修飾children．

解答 Tom is a Grade 7 student．He is clever and polite．His teachers and his classmates like him very much．（Tom是一個(gè)七年級(jí)的學(xué)生，他聰明，有禮貌．他的老師和同學(xué)們很喜歡他．）His favourite festival is Chinese New Year．Because he can eat a lot of delicious food，he can get many red packets，too．（他最喜歡的節(jié)日是春節(jié)．因?yàn)樗�可以吃很多美味食物，還可以得到很多的紅包．）But he knows eating too much is bad for his health【高分句型一】．（但是，他知道，吃太多對(duì)健康不利．）This Chinese New Year，he wants to eat less and exercise more．He wants to donate his pocket money to the children in poor areas．【高分句型二】（今年春節(jié)，他想少吃點(diǎn)，多鍛煉．他想把他的零花錢捐給貧困地區(qū)的孩子們．）

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