Question

12．A．話題作文：近年來由于過分強(qiáng)調(diào)升學(xué)率，加之家長望子成龍心切，給學(xué)生帶來很大壓力，忽略了孩子們的身體健康．因此國家發(fā)起"開展陽光體育運(yùn)動"的號召，以引起人們的重視，請以"運(yùn)動"為話題寫一篇短文．
提示：1．你最喜歡什么運(yùn)動；
2．你在校內(nèi)外所進(jìn)行的運(yùn)動及時(shí)間； 
3．運(yùn)動的感受和意義．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I learned to swim when I was only 5 years old當(dāng)我只有五歲的時(shí)候我學(xué)會了游泳．
when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
Although I was a little nervous in the water at first，with the help of my parents and coach，I could swim well after several weeks雖然一開始在水里我有點(diǎn)緊張，但在我的父母和教練的幫助下，幾個(gè)星期之后我能游的很好．
although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句．不能與but連用．

解答 As we know，sport is an important part of our life．I am interested in sport and I do sports every day．
My favourite sport is swimming．（介紹你最喜歡的運(yùn)動．）It is a healthy and popular sport．I learned to swim when I was only 5 years old．【高分句型一】Although I was a little nervous in the water at first，with the help of my parents and coach，I could swim well after several weeks【高分句型二】．Now，I am very good at swimming and I go swimming over three times a week．As far as I am concernned，swimming in the water is cool and exciting．During the summer holidays，I usually go swimming in the sea with my family and we always have a wonderful time．（如何進(jìn)行體育運(yùn)動）
I think doing sports is necessary．【高分句型一】Sports can help us relax and concentrate on our studies better．Sports can make us grow well．Sports can bring us friends．（運(yùn)動帶給你的益處和意義）

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