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【題目】請根據(jù)下面提供的信息，以“My favourite school life”為題寫一篇英語短文。要求：1.文中不出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名。2.詞數(shù) 60詞左右。短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。 3.書寫規(guī)范，整潔。
1).我們8:00到校，8:30鐘才開始上課。
2).上午我們在學校上4節(jié)課，11:30放學。
3).下午我們不用上課，在學校我們可以做我們喜歡的事情(We can do what we like.)�？梢源蚧@球、踢足球、跑步、唱歌、跳舞、畫畫、去圖書館閱讀等。
4).晚上我們沒有太多的作業(yè)，可以放松自己（relax ourselves）�？梢�9:00上床睡覺，每天有足夠的睡眠。
This is my favourite school life. We don't need to get to school early. Every day we enjoy our school life.

Answer 1

【答案】My favourite school life
This is my favourite school life. We don't need to get to school early. We get to school at 8:00. We start our lesson at 8:30. In the morning we have four lessons and we leave school at 11:30. In the afternoon we haven't got any lessons. We can do what we like.We can play basketball, play football, run ,sing songs ,dance and draw pictures.We can also read books in the library .In the evening we don't have too much homework. We can relax ourselves. We can go to bed at 9:00 and have enough sleep . Every day we enjoy our school life.
【解析】這是一篇命題作文。在要點中給出了寫作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動筆前要先認真閱讀材料，然后圍繞材料適當發(fā)揮，確定時態(tài)主要詞匯等問題。結合所寫內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進行敘述，人稱為第一人稱，寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將所給短語單詞用上；語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。另外，在描述時注意適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，盡量不犯語法錯誤。