Question

12．清晨，在上學的途中，我看見鳥媽媽在給小鳥喂食，它們在林中快樂地歌唱，此情此景，讓我想到了家人（爸爸、媽媽…）在生活和學習中給予的關愛和幫助，請寫一封80詞左右的信，表達你的感恩之情，注：請不要寫出你的真實姓名和學校名稱．
內(nèi)容包括：
（1）根據(jù) 劃線文字和圖片描述情景；
（2）記敘感恩的人和事；
（3）表達愿望和祝福．
參考詞匯：mother bird（鳥媽媽）  feed（喂）
書信的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
On my way to school this morning，I saw a mother bird feeding her baby bird when I walked along the Xiangjiang  river．
句中"when I walked along the Xiangjiang river"為時間狀語從句，句中短語有"on one's way to…在某人去…的路上"、"see sb doing sth 看見某人正在做某事"．這句話意為：早晨，在我去學校的途中，當我沿著香江走的時候，我看到了鳥媽媽在給小鳥喂食．
高分句型二：
I hope you are in good health forever．
句中"you are in good health forever"為賓語從句，句中短語有"be in good health 身體健康"．這句話意為：我希望你能永遠身體健康．

解答 Dear Mom，
On my way to school this morning，I saw a mother bird feeding her baby bird when I walked along the Xiangjiang river．【高分句型一】They were singing in the trees happily．（途中遇到鳥媽媽喂食）
On seeing this，I can't help remembering you，my dearest mother．It's your kindness and love that support me a lot in my life．When I was 10 years old，I caught a cold and had a high fever in a midnight．I felt so terrible．It's you who took good care of me day and night until I recovered to be well again．You are the best mother in the world．I love you．（觸景生情，感謝媽媽）
I will try my best to work hard and be an excellent girl to reward your love．I hope you are in good health forever．【高分句型二】Best wishes!（表達祝福）

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