Question

18．今年的3.15晚會曝光了北京一麥當(dāng)勞店將過期食品改換包裝再次出售一事，引來輿論嘩然，食品衛(wèi)生安全再次成為人們關(guān)注的焦點．作為一名中學(xué)生消費者，該如何維護(hù)自己的權(quán)益，吃到放心的食品？請你根據(jù)下面提供的要點，給校報英語專欄寫一篇80詞左右的短文，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ?br />1買食品前檢查生產(chǎn)日期，查看是否過期；
2識別食品是否新鮮或變質(zhì)；
3購物以后索取并保管好發(fā)票；
4發(fā)現(xiàn)問題食品以后，撥打12315或向當(dāng)?shù)叵�費者協(xié)會尋求幫助．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)：80詞左右；開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2．應(yīng)覆蓋所有要點：可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；
3．參考詞匯：date日期；overdue過期的；go bad變質(zhì)；invoice發(fā)票；Consumer Association消費者協(xié)會．
Since the CCTV program exposed the wrongdoings by a McDonald's restaurant in Beijing，the safety of food has become a hot topic．What shall we do to fight for our rights and interests？First，before buying food，we need to check the date and see whether it is overdue．Then we should study carefully what we buy and decide if it is fresh or it goes bad．After we pay for the food，we should get the invoice and take good care of it．Last but not the least，if we find there's a problem with the food，call 12315 or go to local Consumer Association for help．
Food safety is of great importance in our daily life．In my opinion，the government should take action to punish the producers and companies that went against consumers'rights．On the other hand，we should learn to be wise consumers．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容談?wù)剬κ称钒踩�健康的看法．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從兩個大的方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1買食品前檢查生產(chǎn)日期，查看是否過期；
2識別食品是否新鮮或變質(zhì)；
3購物以后索取并保管好發(fā)票；
4發(fā)現(xiàn)問題食品以后，撥打12315或向當(dāng)?shù)叵�費者協(xié)會尋求幫助．．
常用到的重點短語：
a hot topic一個熱點話題
overdue過期的；
go bad變質(zhì)
Last but not the least最后同樣重要的是
be of great importance非常重要
On the other hand另一方面
高分句型：
Then we should study carefully what we buy and decide if it is fresh or it goes bad．
這里是一個主從復(fù)合句，包含兩個賓語從句，what we buy 和 if it is fresh or it goes bad．
Last but not the least，if we find there's a problem with the food，call 12315 or go to local Consumer Association for help
Last but not the least最后同樣重要的是作為插入語，承接上下文，if表示如果，引導(dǎo)的是時間狀語從句，主句是祈使句，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時代替一般將來時．其中從句中還有一個賓語從句there's a problem with the food．復(fù)合句的應(yīng)用是亮點．

解答 Since the CCTV program exposed the wrong doings by a McDonald's restaurant in Beijing，the safety of food has become a hot topic．What shall we do to fight for our rights and interests？
First，before buying food，we need to check the date and see whether it is overdue．（檢查是否過期）Then we should study carefully what we buy and decide if it is fresh or it goes bad．（識別是否新鮮）（高分句型）After we pay for the food，we should get the invoice and take good care of it．（保管發(fā)票）Last but not the least，if we find there's a problem with the food，call 12315 or go to local Consumer Association for help．（尋求幫忙）（高分句型）
Food safety is of great importance in our daily life．In my opinion，the government should take action to punish the producers and companies that went against consumers'rights．On the other hand，we should learn to be wise consumers．（我的看法）

點評 本文是一篇給材料作文，短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出．寫作時先要圍繞這些要點組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容，注意將這些要點全部表達(dá)出來，并且要有適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，在談到自己的觀點時，要結(jié)合活動內(nèi)容，寫出自己的觀點．