Question

【題目】Write at least 60 words about the topic “ When I met with a difficulty”.(以”當(dāng)我碰到困難時(shí)”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)

(注意:短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名，校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。)

Use the following points as a guide.(短文須包含下列要點(diǎn))

What difficulty did you meet?

How did you overcome it?

How did you feel after you overcame it?

提示: overcome( overcame, overcome) v.克服

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Answer 1

【答案】Every day we are confronted with many difficulties. In my memory, the most unforgettable one happened last term. I was not good at subjects at school and I couldn't get good marks in exams．I felt worried about my study so I decided to work much harder．I listened to the teachers more carefully in class and did more exercises after class．What's more，I often asked my teachers for help．Although I met a lot of difficulties，I didn't give up．Now I have done better in my study．I believe that nothing is too difficult if I put my heart into it．If I meet with difficulties in my life，I should try my best to overcome them．In a word，only the person who overcomes difficulties will be successful

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文。要求以“ When I met with a difficulty”為題，根據(jù)所給出的要點(diǎn)提示寫一篇短文。本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。