Question

5．請(qǐng)以I want to be              為題．寫一寫你將來(lái)的打算（包括你的目標(biāo)和你將采取的行動(dòng)），字?jǐn)?shù)不少于60個(gè)字
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
In order to protect these animals，I want to be a volunteer．為了保護(hù)這些動(dòng)物，我想成為一名志愿者．
in order to為了，后跟動(dòng)詞原形，作目的狀語(yǔ)；want to be，想成為…，動(dòng)詞不定式作賓語(yǔ)．
高分句型二：
To be a good volunteer，I need to do more．要成為一名好的志愿者，我需要做的更多．
To be a good volunteer為動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)；need to do sth需要做某事

解答 I want to be a Volunteer of Protecting Animals
As we know，animals are our good friends．Hower，as we can see，some animals，especially rare animals，are becoming fewer and fewer．（引出話題）
In order to protect these animals，I want to be a volunteer．【高分句型一】（點(diǎn)明想成為一名志愿者）I am active and out-going．I like animals，such as cats，dogs，rabits as well as everything related to animals，like newspapers，magazines and videos．I often take part in the activities of protecing animals．For example，last month I presented a show called Stopping Hunting．Many people came and supported me．（成為志愿者的優(yōu)勢(shì)）
To be a good volunteer，I need to do more．【高分句型二】I will read some books about animals．Meanwhile，I will join a club whose aim is to protect animals．（今后將采取的行動(dòng)）
I believe I can do the work well．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 結(jié)合命題作文的特點(diǎn)，首先要審好題，嚴(yán)格按照要求去組織文章，并抓住重點(diǎn)．要注意語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫．在闡述理想的原因的時(shí)候要恰當(dāng)使用表示順序的詞，使這一部分很有條理．要善于運(yùn)用好的句型如主語(yǔ)從句、動(dòng)詞不定式和倒裝的使用等為文章增色，表達(dá)更流暢．要習(xí)慣用英語(yǔ)式的思維去組織句子，避免漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)．