Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。(16分)

近日，我市某區(qū)在爭創(chuàng)“全國文明城區(qū)”(“national civilized city”)，為此他們采取了大量措施來改善環(huán)保，交通等狀況。中學(xué)生應(yīng)該為創(chuàng)建“全國文明城區(qū)”做貢獻(xiàn)。

請你寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀愕囊恍┯^點。

要點提示：

1．簡單介紹此活動：

2．活動給人們帶來的益處（至少2點）：

3．中學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎樣做（至少3點）：

要求：1．詞數(shù)：80詞左右。

2．文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。

3．短文必須包括所有要點。

Answer 1

【答案】

In order to build a national civilized city,the government has done many things and great changes have taken place in our city in the past few years. People’s lives have improved greatly. It is much easier to get into or out of the city because railway station, airport and BRT have been in use. What’s more , the city is becoming cleaner and tidier and looks very beautiful.

we students should try our best to behave well in our life.

First, we should keep our clothes clean and tidy. Be polite and friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. Then, our city should be kept clean every day. Don’t throw rubbish everywhere. Finally, we should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public.

If everyone behaves well, our city will be more and more beautiful in the future.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。寫出順序的詞來表達(dá)文意更清楚。完成提示詞時也要符合事實。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。

寫作亮點：這篇短文進(jìn)行了較為全面的說明，能用簡短的詞匯表達(dá)出提綱的內(nèi)容，并且進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)?shù)奶幚�，�?zhǔn)確的添加自己的觀點，同時使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。