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請仔細(xì)閱讀上圖，對90后學(xué)生普遍具備的優(yōu)點進行闡述（至少3點），可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮（例如：We are usually fair．We always treat others equally．）．另外，作為一名90后學(xué)生，請結(jié)合你自己和周圍同學(xué)的表現(xiàn)，列舉至少2點不足之處進行描述．最后，請根據(jù)你自己的感悟，對即將開始初中生活的新生提出你的建議．
具體要求：
1．內(nèi)容包括至少3個優(yōu)點、2個不足之處和1個建議，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
2．括號內(nèi)所給例句不得使用．
3.80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
4．語句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，字跡工整．
5．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實校名及姓名．
As post-90s students，we have so many advantages．              ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
When someone is in trouble，we always give him or her a hand．
句中"When someone is in trouble"為時間狀語從句，句中短語有："be in trouble 陷入麻煩之中"、"give sb a hand 幫助某人"．這句話意為：當(dāng)有人遇到麻煩時，我們會幫助他．
高分句型二：
We are so careless that we often make some mistakes in our studies and lives．
句中使用了"so…that…如此…以致于…"句型，句中"that we often make some mistakes in our studies and lives"為"that"引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句．這句話意為：我們太粗心了，經(jīng)常在學(xué)習(xí)或者生活中犯錯誤．

解答 As past-90s students，we have so many advantages．We are usually kind and helpful．When someone is in trouble，we always give him or her a hand．【高分句型一】We are also energetic．We like to do sports and go traveling．Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after class．In addition，we are obviously imaginative．We always try something new and do everything differently．（90后的優(yōu)點）
On the other hand，we also have some disadvantages．To tell you the truth，some of us are a little impolite．Sometimes we can't express our opinions in a correct way．We are so careless that we often make some mistakes in our studies and lives．【高分句型二】（90后的缺點）
In short，as past-90s students who will enter a middle school，I think you need to get used to school life as quickly as you can．You should work hard every day and take an active part in all kinds of activities to improve your abilities．Boys and girls，the future is up to us to create．（提出建議）

點評 寫作文時要注意平時語言的積累，避免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤，寫作時注意條理清楚，語意通暢．