Question

【題目】文段表達(dá)（10分）

根據(jù)中文大意和英文提示詞語，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于50詞的短文。所給的英文提示詞語僅供選用。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。

生活中總會(huì)發(fā)生一些給人印象深刻的事情，有時(shí)令人捧腹大笑，有時(shí)讓人熱淚盈眶，有時(shí)又讓人后悔不已……。假如你是李明，你的英國筆友Mike想和你分享這種經(jīng)歷，請你給Mike回一封郵件，向他描述一件你經(jīng)歷過的事件，包含以下內(nèi)容：

1) When and where did it happen?

2) What was it?

3) How did you feel about it?

提示詞語：on one’s way to school，fall down，hurt，help，feel moved.

Dear Mike,

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Yours,

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mike,

Glad to hea from you again! Just as you have said, we experience different things every day. Now, I’d like to share one of them with you.

It happened on my way to school. One moming I was riding my bike very quickly because I was afraid of being late for school. Suddenly a dog appeared and it nearly ran into my bike. I felt very nervous and fell down from the bike. I hurt my arms and my knees so badly that I couldn’t stand up, nor could I go on riding my bike to school. At that time,a cleaner came up to me and asked me if I needed any help. I told him what had happened. He helped me to stand up and walked to my school with me sitting on the back seat of the bike. In the end,I got to school on time. While I was saying thanks to him,I saw sweat running down his face,I felt very moved.

This is one thing that moved me deeply. Have you ever met this kind of thing? I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求介紹過去發(fā)生的一件事情。主要介紹三個(gè)方面：發(fā)生的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)，時(shí)間的內(nèi)容，自己對這件事情的感受。主要用過去時(shí)態(tài)。注意提示詞上學(xué)的路上，摔跤，受傷。這就已經(jīng)把發(fā)生的事限定在一定范圍中。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】完全符合題目要求，觀點(diǎn)正確，要點(diǎn)齊全。句式多樣，詞匯豐富。語言準(zhǔn)確，語意連貫，表達(dá)清楚，具有邏輯性。