Question

7．上周，你班同學(xué)王磊騎電動(dòng)車匆忙過(guò)馬路時(shí)被一輛急駛的出租車撞倒，司機(jī)逃跑了，王磊只有自救．幸運(yùn)的是，他傷勢(shì)不重，右腿骨折，但是受了驚嚇．為此你班開(kāi)了有關(guān)交通安全方面的主題班會(huì)，讓王磊就親身經(jīng)歷現(xiàn)身說(shuō)法，同學(xué)們就如何減少交通事故和萬(wàn)一遇到交通事故應(yīng)如何自救等問(wèn)題展開(kāi)了討論，假如你是王磊，請(qǐng)以How can We save ourselves？為題寫(xiě)一篇短文，要點(diǎn)如下：

事故	1．上學(xué)路上你騎電動(dòng)車被出租車撞倒，司機(jī)逃跑了…
	2．傷勢(shì)不重，右腿骨折
措施	1．保持鎮(zhèn)靜，打電話求助
	2．保留現(xiàn)場(chǎng)
教訓(xùn)	1．遵守交通規(guī)則
	2．過(guò)馬路要推車慢行…
	3．…

要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；
2）必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右；
4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名和校名等．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I also kept the scene so that the policemen can find out the information as quickly as possible．
句中"so that the policemen can find out the information as quickly as possible"為目的狀語(yǔ)從句．句中短語(yǔ)有"find out  查明，發(fā)現(xiàn)"、"as…as possible  盡可能地…"．這句話意為：我也保護(hù)了現(xiàn)場(chǎng)以便于警察可以盡快地查明真相．
高分句型二：
In short，everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger．
句中使用短語(yǔ)有："in short 總而言之"、"need to do sth 需要做某事"、"stay away from…遠(yuǎn)離…"．這句話意為：總而言之，每個(gè)人都需要學(xué)習(xí)怎么保護(hù)自己，遠(yuǎn)離危險(xiǎn)．

解答 How Can We Protect Ourselves
Last week，I was knocked down by a taxi when I rode to school．After that，the driver ran away．Luckily，I wasn't badly hurt．My right leg was hurt．At first，I was afraid．But I kept calm after a while，then I called for help．I also kept the scene so that the policemen can find out the information as quickly as possible．【高分句型一】（講述事故）
The accident gave me a lesson that self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers．But how can we protect ourselves？Here are some suggestions．（總結(jié)教訓(xùn)）
First，we should obey the traffic rules．Also，we should be careful when we cross the road．Second，if we are in danger，we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep us safe．In short，everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger．【高分句型二】（提出建議）

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