Question

7．請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖片提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇關(guān)于你的朋友亮亮減肥的故事．并通過(guò)此事，談?wù)勀愕母邢耄�要求�?br />1 90詞左右；
2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使行文連貫完整；
3文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名；
4 開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：overweight，flied chicken，balanced diet，good figure/shape

Liangliang is no longer the boy he used to be-he has changed greatly．Only a year ago，          ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①These changes helped him lose a lot of weight．這些變化幫助他減了肥．本句中help sb do sth幫助某人做某事，后面跟動(dòng)詞原形，lose weight減肥．
②He started to exercise．他開始做運(yùn)動(dòng)．固定短語(yǔ)start to do sth開始做某事，后面跟to引導(dǎo)的不定式形式．

解答 Liangliang is no longer the boy he used to be-he has changed greatly．Only a year ago，he was overweight and a little lazy．He got tired easily and did not like sports．His favorite meal was fried chicken and chips（介紹亮亮減肥前的情況）．One day，he realized that he couldn't continue like this．So，he decided to change．He started to exercise（高分句型）．He ran in the school playground every day．He also began eating a healthier diet of more fruits and vegetables，and less meat．These changes helped him lose a lot of weight（高分句型）．He is now a very happy boy in very good shape，and he is always so active．（介紹亮亮如何減肥）
From Liangliang's story，we learn a lot．Where there'a a will，there's a way．（亮亮減肥的啟示）

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