Question

【題目】越來越多的汽車進入我們的家庭生活，改善了我們的生活、但同時也帶來了很多問題。作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該怎樣做呢？請寫一篇有關(guān)交通安全的短文，80詞左右。內(nèi)容包含：1. 遵守交通規(guī)則，如走人行道，過斑馬線。2. 不在街道上或馬路上玩耍和踢球。3. 勸父母不能酒后駕車。

參考詞匯： sidewalk人行道 zebra－crossing斑馬線 trafficaccidents交通事故 drunk driving酒駕

Answer 1

【答案】With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic, drunk driving and traffic accidents.

Traffic safety is everybody's business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on sidewalk. When we cross zebra-crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road. We can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving, etc. We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody takes traffic safety seriously can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.

【解析】

這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下我們的交通安全。所提供的材料中列舉了越來越多的汽車進入我們的家庭生活，改善了我們的生活、但同時也帶來了很多問題。主要從遵守交通規(guī)則，如走人行道，過斑馬線；不在街道上或馬路上玩耍和踢球；勸父母不能酒后駕車這幾個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達具有條理性。

【高分句型一】

With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. 隨著越來越多的汽車進入我們的家庭，我們很高興它大大改善了我們的生活。With more and more cars coming into our families是伴隨狀語；that it has greatly improved our life.是表語從句。

【高分句型二】

We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody takes traffic safety seriously can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks. 我們可以說汽車正在進入我們的生活，但只有當(dāng)每個人都重視交通安全時，我們才能安全地在道路上行駛和在人行道上行走。句子but only when everybody takes traffic safety seriously是強調(diào)句；句子can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.是倒裝句。