Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假設(shè)你是李明。上周日你的班里舉行了一次畢業(yè)聚會(huì)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，給你的英國(guó)筆友Robert寫一封郵件，向他描述聚會(huì)的情況及談?wù)勀惝?dāng)時(shí)的感受。

要求：1. 語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；

2. 必須包含所給提示，并進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3. 詞數(shù)80左右。(郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))

Hi Robert,

We had a graduation party last Sunday.

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Do you have such a party? Please write soon.

Answer 1

【答案】Hi Robert，

We had a graduation party last Sunday．Long before 3：00 pm，all the students in my class couldn't wait to come to the hall． Our teachers and parents were invited to the party，too．First，our monitor made a speech． He thanked our teachers and parents sincerely．Next，we gave presents to each other．The most exciting moment was the show time．We sang，danced and played games．Our English teacher told a story which made us all laugh． Everyone was so happy．I think the wonderful party will always be in my mind．

Do you have such a party？Please write soon．

Yours，Li Ming

【解析】這是一篇給材料的應(yīng)用文寫作。根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容以李明的名義，給你的英國(guó)筆友Robert寫一封郵件，向他描述聚會(huì)的情況及談?wù)勀惝?dāng)時(shí)的感受。寫作要注意一下幾點(diǎn)：1.此書面表達(dá)為郵件，可分兩個(gè)部分來寫。第一部分為主體，介紹聚會(huì)開始的時(shí)間：下午三點(diǎn)；地點(diǎn)：in the hall；成員：teachers，parents，students；活動(dòng)：make a speech，sing等；自己當(dāng)時(shí)的感受：happy。第二部分一句帶過，期待對(duì)方回信。2.敘述的是上周日舉行的畢業(yè)聚會(huì)，句子用一般過去時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。3.參考詞匯：couldn’t wait to do sth.迫不及待做某事；make a speech 做演講；give sth. to sb. 把某物給某人。4.可使用which引導(dǎo)的定語從句增添文章亮點(diǎn)。