Question

3．我們周圍的環(huán)境變得越來越嚴(yán)重，尤其近來我國多地出現(xiàn)霧霾（smog）天氣，更引發(fā)了人們對環(huán)境污染的關(guān)注．請你圍繞環(huán)境保護(hù)這一主題，談一談你的家鄉(xiāng)存在什么環(huán)境問題，你作為一名中學(xué)生應(yīng)該如何來保護(hù)環(huán)境，列舉出其中至少3項(xiàng)來說明．要求：
（1）語言通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范．
（2）詞數(shù)：80詞左右．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇談?wù)撃壳胺浅Ｆ毡榈默F(xiàn)象-霧霾的文章，是一篇議論文，描述現(xiàn)象時(shí)，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，而談到如何保護(hù)環(huán)境時(shí)，則可以用We should do sth．或者是We shouldn't do sth．等句型，要點(diǎn)包括：1．出現(xiàn)的霧霾現(xiàn)象．2．原因分析．3．如何保護(hù)環(huán)境（至少3條）．

解答 As we know，the environment around us is getting worse and worse．Some chemical factories always pour waste water into the stream．And they also produce terrible gas．In some places，some people even have no clean water to drink．So I think we must do something to protect the environment．
   How to protect the environment？First，as a student，we should use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping．Second，we'd better reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can．Third，we should never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms．In a word，we must try our best to protect our environment．I believe we can make the world a better place to live in．

點(diǎn)評 以提綱提供情景的作文．要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會(huì)造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱的要點(diǎn)．行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句．在作文完成的時(shí)候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)．