Question

【題目】書面表達(dá) （滿分15分）

假設(shè)你叫李俊，你的美國(guó)朋友David想要在中國(guó)結(jié)交更多的朋友。你通過電子郵件，把你的最好的朋友王明介紹給他。王明情況見下表：

姓名	王明
年齡	15
外貌	方臉，大眼睛，短發(fā)，高個(gè)子；
個(gè)性	誠(chéng)實(shí)，幽默，替朋友保守秘密，從不說他人壞話；
愛好	癡迷于DIY, 上周給我做了一張生日卡片；
其他情況	1、 對(duì)了解不同種類的鳥類感興趣，是觀鳥協(xié)會(huì)的一員； 2、 最喜歡冬季，因?yàn)樗�喜歡堆雪人，打雪仗；
理想	嗓音好，喜歡唱歌，長(zhǎng)大后想成為一名歌手；

要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下連貫；

2）必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；

4）不使用真實(shí)姓名和校名等。

Dear David,

How are you? I’m writing to introduce my best friend Wang Ming to you.

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I hope you can make friends with him as soon as you can. Maybe he can show you around our country at the Spring Festival.

Best wishes,

Li Jun

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear David,

How are you? I’m writing to introduce my best friend Wang Ming to you.

He is 15 years old. He is tall with two big eyes. He is tall and has short hair.

Wang Ming has a good sense of humor. He often tells us funny stories and makes us happy. He is also an honest boy and he can keep secrets for his friends. He never says a bad word about others.

He is crazy about DIY. It was my birthday last week. He made a birthday card for me. He is interested in learning about different kinds of birds and now he is a member of the Birdwatching Society. Among/Of the four seasons, he likes winter best because he likes making snowmen and having snowball fights with his friends.

He has a good voice and is good at singing. So he wants to be a singer when he grows up.

I hope you can make friends with him as soon as you can. Maybe he can show you around our country at the Spring Festival.

Best wishes,

Li Jun

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，首先，要注意格式，要有標(biāo)題、落款，根據(jù)題目要求用準(zhǔn)確的詞表達(dá)出來，特別注意對(duì)不會(huì)的表達(dá)進(jìn)行替換，展開來說，同時(shí)將文章寫成經(jīng)典的“三段式”文章，使用自己積累的高級(jí)詞匯，作文模板，起承轉(zhuǎn)合的詞，將文章寫出水平。對(duì)于應(yīng)用文寫作要簡(jiǎn)潔明了，直入主題，平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)多進(jìn)行作文模板的記憶，萬能句型的積累，在寫作之前，首先對(duì)題目進(jìn)行認(rèn)真的審清，并在腦海中回想自己積累的哪些句式、句型、單詞能用進(jìn)來，這些單詞、句型都應(yīng)是經(jīng)典的，不會(huì)錯(cuò)的。英語文字不宜寫得太小，所有字母都頂橫線寫好，看起來卷面整潔，寫錯(cuò)的地方只需輕輕劃一筆就行，切不可反復(fù)涂黑。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：該文簡(jiǎn)潔明了，直入主題，結(jié)構(gòu)完整。文章多處使用了固定短語如keep secrets for為……保密、say a bad word about sb說某人的壞話、be crazy about癡迷于、be interested in對(duì)……感興趣、be good at擅長(zhǎng)等等，都為文章增色不少。