Question

Sandy 昨天感冒，發(fā)高燒，無法到校上課，醫(yī)生要求她臥床休息兩天。

（A）請你代她寫一張請假條，給她的老師Miss Sue．（5分）

Dear             , I’m sorry to tell you that I                    　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 I hope I’ll get well and go back to school soon. Thank you! Yours sincerely _____________

（B）假如你是她的朋友，從生活習慣和飲食習慣給她提出建議。（至少五個句子）。（5分）

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Answer 1

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One possible version：

(A)

Dear Miss Sue,

      I'm sorry to tell you that I can't go to school today. I've caught a cold. Yesterday I had a headache and had a fever, so I went to see a doctor. He gave me some medicine and asked me to stay in bed for two days . and I can't go to school today. Now I'm writing to you to ask for two days' sick leave.

 I hope I’ll get well and go back to school soon.

 Thank you!

                                                               Yours sincerely

    Sandy

(B) 

  I’m sorry to hear that you have got a cold. I think you should pay more attention to your health.

  First of all, it’s important to get enough sleep every day. Make sure you can sleep at least eight hours a day. And eat more vegetables and fruits instead of junk food. Junk food does harm to our body. What’s more, you should spend an hour a day doing exercise like playing basketball,playing soccer an so on.

【解析】

試題分析：在做書面表達前一定要審好題。本篇書面表達要求有兩方面的內容。（A）部分要求寫一張請假條。寫請假條時要注意，要寫清楚請假的原因，請假的時間以及期限，并要附屬禮貌性的感謝的話語。也要注意些請假條并非寫信，雖然格式相同。請假條的特點為簡明扼要。（B）部分要求的是針對Sandy請假的緣由給他幾條建議。此題實質是在考查兩方面內容，一方面是課本中如何保持健康。另一方面是英語中提建議的方法。

【亮點說明】（A）部分的請假條結構緊湊，內容簡明扼要。準確使用了所學短語，have a cold, have a fever, have a headache, see a doctor,stay in bed for two days 等等。完全達到了請假條的寫作標準。（B）部分內容層次分明。分別從作息，飲食，鍛煉三個方面來表達如何保持健康。每一方面銜接自如。并且用到了提建議的表達方式。各種各樣的短語句式也為文章增添了色彩。

 考點：話題作文。