Question

20．三年初中生活使每個(gè)人都改變了很多，談?wù)勀愕慕裎糇兓�，�?qǐng)以"My change"為題完成一篇寫作．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
In the past，I was too shy to speak in front of others過去我太害羞了不敢在人前講話．
too+adj/adv+to do sth太…而不能做某事
【高分句型二】
I study so well that I'm a top student in our class now．我學(xué)習(xí)很努力現(xiàn)在是我們班的第一名．
so…that如此…以至于．that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句．

解答 My change
I'm Paul，a Grade 9student in No.1Middle School．I'll graduate this summer．I've changed a lot during the last three years．In the past，I was short．I was too shy to speak in front of others．【高分句型一】I walked to school．I wasn't interested in study and hated tests，so I was weak in all my subjects． Aand I was silent in classWhat's more，I played every day after school．（過去）
     However，I've changed greatly now．I'm tall．I am more outgoing and I'm willing to share things with others and I get along well with my classmates．I take the bus to school．I like studying and  brave to ask questions in class． I study so well that I'm a top student in our class now．【高分句型二】Moreover，I take an active part in all kinds of school activities．Last term，I even won the prize in the school English Writing Competition．（改變后）
  I hope to get better grades and go to senior high school．So I will study harder and learn more．（愿望和打算）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個(gè)基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語、短語和句型，以充分地表達(dá)文章的內(nèi)容．盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容．這是體現(xiàn)自身能力的重要一環(huán)．