Question

書面表達(dá)（滿分10分）
前一段時(shí)間，歌舞《江南style》風(fēng)靡全球，而韓國歌手樸載相更是憑借此歌紅遍全世界。請根據(jù)下表所提供的信息寫一篇英語短文介紹一下PSY（鳥叔）:

要求：1. 詞數(shù): 80個(gè)左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出的內(nèi)容不記入總詞數(shù)）；
2. 內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯；
3. 條理清楚、語句連貫；
Have you heard of Gangnam Style? What do you know about the singer who sings this song?
PSY comes from                                                                                     
                                                                                                 
Let’s sing and dance to the song Gangnam Style together now!

Answer 1

Have you heard of Gangnam Style? What do you know about the singer who sings this song?
PSY comes from Korea. His nickname is Uncle Bird. He was born in December 11, 197
7.He is fat and has small eyes. He always wears a pair of sunglasses and this makes him very cool. He speaks both Korean and English. He has a sister and he lives with his father. He got married in 2006 and has twin daughters. He is an experienced singer and he is good at Hip-Hop and Rap Music. His main songs are Birds, Gangnam Styles and so on. Gangnam Style is one of his most popular songs. It made him famous immediately throughout the world, This song is liked by people of all ages. And it has turned into many other kinds of “styles”
Let’s sing and dance to the song Gangnam Style together now!

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫一篇介紹韓國歌星樸載相的短文。本題所給材料比較詳細(xì)。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意謂語動(dòng)詞的變化。動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。
點(diǎn)評：做英語書面表達(dá)時(shí)，要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤，寫好后多讀多修改，我想一定會寫出滿意的文章來。