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15．你準(zhǔn)備參加學(xué)校"英語角"開展的"用英語講故事"活動，你選取了"曹沖稱象"這個(gè)大家熟悉的故事．請你根據(jù)左邊圖片內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇80 詞以上的小短文．
注意：標(biāo)題、開頭和結(jié)尾已在答題紙上給出，不計(jì)字?jǐn)?shù)．

Answer 1

分析 本題是一篇圖畫作文，內(nèi)容學(xué)生很熟悉，曹沖稱象的故事眾所周知，關(guān)鍵是在描述的時(shí)候時(shí)態(tài)的變化和直接引語與間接引語的使用，因?yàn)槭侵v故事，所以基礎(chǔ)時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該是一般過去時(shí)，寫作時(shí)要把曹沖稱象的方法和過程寫出來，因?yàn)槭菙⑹龉适�，所以�?yīng)該用第三人稱，寫作時(shí)要注意人稱的使用．

解答 How Cao Chong Had the Elephant Weighed
  Cao Cao was very glad to have received an elephant as a present．He wanted to know how heavy the elephant was，but there was no scale（秤） big enough to weigh such a huge creature．One day，Cao Chong said to his father．"I've found a way to weigh the elephant．"
  Cao Chong asked a man to lead the elephant onto a boat．When the boat stopped sinking，the man draw a line along on the boat side．After the elephant was led away，Cao Chong had some men put stones into the boat until the water reached the line．
  Cao Chong asked the men to weigh each stone from the boat and put down the number．"Add up all the numbers and we will know the weight of the elephant．"Cao Chong said to his father with kind of pride．

點(diǎn)評 本題是一篇看圖作文，要求描寫曹沖稱象的故事，結(jié)合圖畫內(nèi)容比較熟悉，但是寫作時(shí)要注意：1．正確理解提示和要求．2．確定體裁格式．3．確立人稱．4．確定時(shí)態(tài)和語態(tài)．同時(shí)依據(jù)圖畫細(xì)節(jié)對畫面的內(nèi)容加以想象、擴(kuò)充或補(bǔ)充．