Question

【題目】請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示用英語(yǔ)介紹Tom過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在的情況，并就此事談?wù)勀愕目捶�及�?duì)他的建議。要求：1．書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范整潔，80詞左右；2．短文必須包括表格中的信息，條理清晰，觀點(diǎn)明確，意思連貫。3. 短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。

過(guò)去	喜歡看書(shū)，功課好，花很多時(shí)間學(xué)習(xí)和鍛煉.
現(xiàn)在	因沉溺于玩電腦游戲和看電視導(dǎo)致對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)沒(méi)興趣，上課睡覺(jué)，不能完成作業(yè)，成績(jī)差。
你的看法	玩電腦游戲可以使人放松，但…… 看電視能增長(zhǎng)知識(shí)，但……
你的建議	（至少發(fā)揮兩點(diǎn)）

Tom has changed a lot in the last few years. ……

Answer 1

【答案】Tom has changed a lot in the last few years. He used to like reading books and do well in his lessons .He also spent much time studying and doing exercises at school. But now he is so crazy about computer games and watching TV that he has no interest in his schoolwork and doesn't listen to teachers as carefully as before in class. Also, he can't hand in your homework on time and he often sleeps in class. Perhaps playing computer games can make him feel relaxed, but if he spends too much time on it, he will have less time to study. And it may be bad for his health. For example, it can hurt his eyes and hands.

I hope he should concentrate more on his schoolwork. Why not take part in some after-school activities when he feels bored? Why not spend more free time chatting with his friends?

【解析】本文是一篇給材料作文。首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱(chēng)時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。