Question

10．"中學生是否可以在校使用手機？"你班就此話題進行了討論．請你根據(jù)以下記錄表寫一篇短文，陳述討論結(jié)果，并發(fā)表你的觀點．

Opinions	Reasons
Mobile phones should be used	surf the Internet for information play games for enjoyment …
Mobile phones shouldn't be used	send messages in class   use public phone school …．

要求
①短文應包括表中所給信息；②補全表中的理由，同時發(fā)表你的觀點；③文中不得出現(xiàn)與你身份相關(guān)的信息；④詞數(shù)：80一100個，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Recently we h eld a discussio n about whether the students should use mobile phones at school or not．Some of us think _____________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
we can surf the Internet for information we need我們能上網(wǎng)查找我們需要的信息．
we need是省略了關(guān)系詞that的定語從句，修飾information．
【高分句型二】
it's not a good idea to use mobile phones  at  school  because  it  makes a  difference  to improving our study在學校用手機不是一個好想法，因為對我們的成績的提高有影響．
because引導的原因狀語從句．

解答 Recently we held a discussio n about whether the students should use mobile phones at school or not．Some of us think mobile phones should be used at school．First，we can surf the Internet for information we need．【高分句型一】Second，with mobile phone we can play games for enjoyment in our free time．Finally，we can call our parents easily．（贊同）
      However，some other students don't think so．On one hand，some students send messages on mobile phones in class．On the other hand，we can use the school public phones．Besides，keeping a mobile phone costs money．（反對）
 In  my  opinion，it's not a good idea to use mobile phones  at  school  because  it  makes  a  difference  to improving our study【高分句型二】．（我的觀點）

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