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內(nèi)容包括：1.不大，但很漂亮，離家近2． 不必早起，到校時(shí)間為早上九點(diǎn)，下午四點(diǎn)放學(xué)。有很多業(yè)余時(shí)間滿足愛好。每天只花半小時(shí)做作業(yè)。3．有干凈漂亮的餐廳，可以吃到美味健康的食物。還可以觀看電視。4.班級小，大約15人，功課可以自己選擇，有許多興趣小組。5．喜歡閱讀， 有一個(gè)帶有很多有用的書籍的大圖書館，一個(gè)足球場還有一個(gè)游泳池每周可以去附近的公園游玩。6能有需多好朋友，開心每一天。

My ideal school

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【答案】

Everyone has their own ideal school. I think my ideal school life is meaningful and colorful. I’m very happy to study in the school.

My ideal school isn’t very large, but it is beautiful. I hope my ideal school starts at9:00 a.m. because l like to get up late. I hope my ideal school finishes at 4:00 p.m. So l can have lots of time to have a rest and do some after school activities. I want to spend half an hour doing homework every day. We have an hour for lunch, we can eat delicious food and chat with each other in the big dining hall. We can also watch TV here. The classes are quite small, there are about 15 students in each class. You can choose the subject that you like.There are many interesting groups.There is a big library with many useful books in it.We can read books there.There is a football ground and a swimming pool.We can go to the park nearby every week.We have many friends.We live and study happily together.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時(shí)要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點(diǎn)一定齊全。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全。文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如I hope my ideal school starts at9:00 a.m. because l like to get up late. I hope my ideal school finishes at 4:00 p.m. So l can have lots of time to have a rest and do some after school activities.等等。