Question

3．假如你是Grace，Jenny是你的好朋友．最近你準(zhǔn)備參加學(xué)校舉行的題為"My friend"的英語征文競(jìng)賽．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，完成這篇短文．短文不得少于50詞，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
要點(diǎn)：
1．姓名：Jenny Brown
2．年齡：12歲（years old）．
3．電話號(hào)碼：276-3589．
4．家庭成員：爸爸、媽媽、一個(gè)哥哥和一個(gè)妹妹．
5．房間：如下圖．

My friend
Hi，I'm Grace．I have a good friend．Her name is Jenny Brown．She's 12 years old．Her phone number is 276-3589．There are five people in her family．They are her parents，her brother，her sister and she．
　　She has a nice room．A bookcase，a bed and a sofa are in her room．A chair and a desk are in it，too．Jenny's hat is on the bed．Her clock is on the small table．A pen，a notebook and a key are on the desk．She likes her room very much．
　　I have a good friend．What about you？．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①Jenny's hat is on the bed．詹妮的帽子在床上．這里Jenny's hat 表示詹妮的帽子，使用的是名詞所有格，表示某某的，on the bed表示在床上．
②What about you？你呢？這里what about表示某某怎么樣，后面跟名詞，代詞或者動(dòng)名詞形式．

解答 My friend
Hi，I'm Grace．I have a good friend．（引出話題）Her name is Jenny Brown．She's 12 years old．Her phone number is 276-3589．There are five people in her family．They are her parents，her brother，her sister and she．（介紹她的基本情況）
　　She has a nice room．A bookcase，a bed and a sofa are in her room．A chair and a desk are in it，too．Jenny's hat is on the bed（高分句型）．Her clock is on the small table．A pen，a notebook and a key are on the desk．She likes her room very much．（介紹她的房間）
　　I have a good friend．What about you（高分句型）？（結(jié)束語）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 在寫作時(shí)要明確寫作要點(diǎn)，注意寫作中人稱和時(shí)態(tài)的使用，做到思路清晰，表達(dá)流暢．還可以根據(jù)考生的語言積累，多使用一些短語和高分句型．