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【題目】社會不斷在發(fā)展進步，成績好已經(jīng)不再是衡量一個好學生的唯一標準。某校正在開展“走進新時代，爭當合格中學生”的大討論，以“We act，we improve”為主題，寫一篇演講稿，談談你覺得除了學習課本知識之外，我們還應該做些什么？提示如下：

平時	1).學會照顧自己, 高標準工作，謙虛，易于合作； 2).有好的閱讀習慣，提高自己； 3).注意保護環(huán)境，不亂丟垃圾，步行或騎自行車上學； 4).懂餐桌禮儀，舉止文明......(自由發(fā)揮1-2句)
空余時間	1).關(guān)注殘疾人，給他們向公眾展示技能的機會； 2).欣賞大自然的美，理解保護大自然的重要性。
總結(jié)	(1-2句)

要求：1）注意人稱和時態(tài)。
2）要點齊全，可適當增加細節(jié)使句子通順、連貫。
3）不要逐字翻譯，詞數(shù)100左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
With the development of the society, to learn well is not the only thing a student should do. To be a qualified(合格的) middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do.

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version：

With the development of the society, to learn well is not the only thing a student should do. To be a qualified(合格的) middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do.

First, we usually learn to look after ourselves. We should work to high standards and we are modest and easy to work with. Second, we should have good reading habits to improve ourselves. Third,we should pay attention to protecting the environment. We must not drop litter carelessly. We had better go to school on foot or by bicycle. Fourth, we should learn about good table manners and behave politely. We should wait for everyone to finish before you leave the table. We should queue, we must not push in before others.

Moreover,in our spare time,we should care about the disabled and give them a chance to show their skills to the public.Also,we should go out to enjoy the beauty of nature in order to understand the importance of protecting nature.

In a word,if we follow the advice,we will make a big difference to ourselves.\The more we act,the better we will improve.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，以“We act，we improve”為主題，寫一篇演講稿，談談我覺得除了學習課本知識之外，我們還應該做些什么？結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：I think……，F(xiàn)irst, we usually learn to……，Second, we should……，We must not……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。