Question

根據(jù)所給情景寫(xiě)一封不少于60詞的信

      Suppose you are Joe. Your friend Betty is upset about a coming exam for she cares too much about the result. What do you think? Try to offer her some advice. （假如你是Joe, 你的好朋友Betty 因?yàn)檫^(guò)于在意考試結(jié)果而感到焦慮。請(qǐng)給她寫(xiě)一封信，談?wù)勀愕目捶�，并給她一些建議。）

（注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)任何姓名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）

 

Answer 1

【答案】

（范文摘自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，范文分析出自本人）

More and more people like shopping（like doing sth） in supermarkets, which（定語(yǔ)從句） have developed rapidly in recent years. This, of course, has something to do with the convenience they offer to customers.

Firstly, prices in supermarkets are much lower, for they are run in the self-service style, therefore, fewer shop assistants are needed. Secondly, a wide variety of goods are displayed to satisfy the needs of different people. Thirdly, supermarkets usually have longer opening hours than other shops and stores.

Shopping in supermarkets can make customers feel confident, comfortable and relaxed. Moreover, it saves them both time and money.

That's why supermarkets are getting more and more crowded nowadays.

【解析】這類作文屬于開(kāi)放型作文，學(xué)生可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，自由表達(dá)自己的想法，考生可以發(fā)揮自己的英語(yǔ)水平，區(qū)分度明顯，成績(jī)好的學(xué)生可以寫(xiě)出高級(jí)句型，顯示自己的英語(yǔ)水平，如果成績(jī)不好的學(xué)生，過(guò)多使用普通句式，文章就顯得dry。

作文點(diǎn)評(píng)：文章的層次分明，邏輯感強(qiáng)，Firstly，Secondly, Thirdly，等使人覺(jué)得文章很通暢，這是現(xiàn)在非常欠缺的。此外，短語(yǔ)，例如has something to do with，offer to，both   and等都用得非常好，還有定語(yǔ)從句，名詞性從句，是一遍值得學(xué)習(xí)的范文，考生應(yīng)該在平時(shí)多積累這些文章。