Question

19．Write a passage of at least 60words on the topic"My happy day"（以"我快樂(lè)的一天"為題，寫一篇不少于60字的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）．
The following points are for your reference：（所給提示僅供參考）
1What happened on that day？
2Why did you feel happy？

Answer 1

分析 本文為提綱作文，且為記敘文．由題目要求可知要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)來(lái)描述，人稱為第一人稱I或we．寫作要點(diǎn)為：1．那一天發(fā)生了什么事，事情發(fā)生的起因，經(jīng)過(guò)和結(jié)果．2．覺(jué)得開心的原因．重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)及詞匯：go to the zoo：去動(dòng)物園there be：有l(wèi)ots of：許多so…that…：如此…以至于…高分句型：1．It took us about two hours to get there by bus．坐公交車去那里花了我們大約兩個(gè)小時(shí)．it takes（took） sb time to do sth表示花費(fèi)某人時(shí)間做某事．2．We didn't go home until 5：00 in the afternoon．直到下午五點(diǎn)我們才回家．not…until句型表示直到…才…

解答 My Happy DayI went to the zoo with my friends last Sunday．It was hot and sunny that day．（高分句型1）It took us about two hours to get there by bus．There were thousands of people in the zoo．We saw lots of animals，such as，pandas，kangaroos，polar bears，giraffes，elephants，tigers，wolves，snakes and so on．We also saw the elephant show．The elephants were so clever that they could do lots of things like us．At noon we had a picnic in the zoo．And then we thew the rubbish into the dustbin．（高分句型2）We didn't go home until 5：00 in the afternoon．（發(fā)生的事情） Although we were tired，we learnt many animals，so we felt happy．（感到開心的原因）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查學(xué)生平時(shí)短語(yǔ)和詞匯量的積累，以及組織語(yǔ)言編故事的能力．要注意記敘類文章表達(dá)要有邏輯，條理清楚，說(shuō)清事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過(guò)和結(jié)果．