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【題目】在八年級(jí)上學(xué)期即將結(jié)束之際，八(1)班將舉行一次主題班會(huì)，要求同學(xué)們談?wù)勥@一學(xué)期自己的收獲與變化。請(qǐng)為David準(zhǔn)備一份80詞左右的演講稿，具體內(nèi)容如下：

	過(guò)去	現(xiàn)在
學(xué)習(xí)	很少閱讀，花時(shí)間在……	讀書(shū)使我放松……
環(huán)保	浪費(fèi)水電，隨處亂拋垃圾	意識(shí)到環(huán)保的重要性，垃圾入桶
禮儀	大聲喧嘩，插隊(duì)推擠	舉止禮貌，主動(dòng)讓座
愛(ài)心	不知道如何關(guān)心他人	……
展望未來(lái)	相信自己在將來(lái)會(huì)越來(lái)越棒。

Hello, everyone. I'm David from Class 1, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last term, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in many ways.……
Thanks for listening!

Answer 1

【答案】Hello, everyone. I'm David from Class 1, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last term, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in many ways.
First, in the past I seldom read books. I used to spend most of my time playing computer games. Now I find it interesting to do some reading because good books help me relax after a busy day. They also open up a whole new world to me.
Second, I always forgot to turn off the tap and the power when they were not in use. Sometimes I left the tap running after I washed my hands. I always dropped litter carelessly in the park. But now I have realized the importance of protecting the environment. I always throw the litter into the rubbish bins.
Third, I was impolite before. I sometimes shouted loudly or pushed in before others in public places. Now, I can behave politely in public and I often give my seat to someone in need on the bus.
Fourth, I cared little about others. But now I offer to help my blind neighbors and donate all my pocket money to Project Hope.
I'm sure I will do better and better in Grade 9.
Thanks for listening!
【解析】提綱作文要求學(xué)生根據(jù)所給的寫(xiě)作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開(kāi)寫(xiě)作。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語(yǔ)言老表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫(xiě)作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言的表達(dá)能力。寫(xiě)好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫(xiě)作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。