Question

4．加拿大中學(xué)生Peter在你校學(xué)習(xí)期滿，回國(guó)后寫來(lái)一封感謝信，同時(shí)指出了同學(xué)們的一些不良行為，假如你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示給Peter回一封電子郵件．
要點(diǎn)提示：
1．表示感謝；
2．表達(dá)意思（告別高聲喧嘩、亂丟亂扔等不良行為）；
3…
要求：
1.80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2．文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱．
Dear Peter，
I'm glad to receive your email．Thank you for telling us so much．Tm very sorry for what we have done．As a student，we should learn to have good habits．First，we will keep quiet in public．Also，we will no longer throw things here and there．What's more，we won't write or draw on the desks and other places，and we will be more polite to others．
I'd like to invite you to visit our school again．I'm sure you will see a cleaner school．
Best wishes！
                                                                                    Yours，
                                                                                    Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①I'm glad to receive your email．我很高興收到你的電子郵件．句子中be glad to do sth表示高興做某事．
②I'd like to invite you to visit our school again．我想邀請(qǐng)你再來(lái)參觀我們的學(xué)校．句子中would like to do sth表示想做某事；invite sb to some place邀請(qǐng)某人去某個(gè)地方．

解答 Dear Peter，
   I'm glad to receive your email．（高分句型）Thank you for telling us so much．I'm very sorry for what we have done．（引出話題）
   As a student，we should learn to have good habits．First，we will keep quiet in public．Also，we will no longer throw things here and there．What's more，we won't write or draw on the desks and other places，and we will be more polite to others．（作為學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該做的事情）
   I'd like to invite you to visit our school again．（高分句型） I'm sure you will see a cleaner school．（提出邀請(qǐng)）
   Best wishes!
                                                   Yours，
                                                   Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇作文由于提綱材料本身決定了寫作對(duì)象、范圍、目的、體裁等，命題者的意圖往往較容易領(lǐng)悟，考生在審題上一般不會(huì)出現(xiàn)障礙．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示運(yùn)用相關(guān)的句型結(jié)構(gòu)靈活的展開作文．考生需注意不要逐詞逐句地進(jìn)行翻譯，所寫句子要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．