Question

19．假設(shè)你們學(xué)校在澳大利亞的友好學(xué)校的師生想要了解你校學(xué)生的興趣和愛好，請(qǐng)你寫一篇100詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文，介紹一下你的興趣和愛好及其意義．
注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地區(qū)、學(xué)校及姓名．

Answer 1

分析 本篇作文是向澳大利亞的友好學(xué)校的師生介紹自己的興趣和愛好，描述事實(shí)應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，寫作要點(diǎn)應(yīng)該包括：1．你的愛好是什么？2．為什么愛好這件事？寫作的時(shí)候可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意一定要詞數(shù)達(dá)到100詞左右．

解答 My hobby is collecting stamps．I have been collecting stamps for 10 years．Usually I collect stamps in three ways．When I get letters，I cut the stamps off the envelops； Every year I go to post offices to buy a set of new stamps and I also go to the stamp market to buy old stamps and foreign stamps； I have lots of friends who have the same hobby as I，so I sometimes exchange my stamps with them．
    I think my hobby is very interesting．First，it helps me learn different cultures，including history and international knowledge； Second，I can enjoy the beauty of art； Third，by exchanging stamps，I have made more friends； Fourth，it's also a way of saving money，because the stamps will be more valuable as the time passes by．
    Hobbies make our life more colorful．What about your hobbies？

點(diǎn)評(píng) 以提綱提供情景的作文，要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語(yǔ)法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會(huì)造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱的要點(diǎn)．行文間要注意簡(jiǎn)化描述，用簡(jiǎn)短的語(yǔ)句代替冗長(zhǎng)的語(yǔ)句．在作文完成的時(shí)候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)．寫作時(shí)，要注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式的變化．另外，還需要使用一些句型和短語(yǔ)，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢．