Question

【題目】我們的生活中處處充滿著愛，有父母的愛，有老師的愛，有同學的愛，有朋友的愛……請以“Love Around Me（我身邊的愛）”為題，寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容要點如下：

愛你的人	愛的表現(xiàn)
父母	為你做早餐；送你上學……
老師	傳授知識；照顧你……
同學	一起學習；和睦相處……
朋友	在網(wǎng)上交流；分享快樂與煩惱……

寫作要求：1. 根據(jù)表格提示父母的愛、老師的愛、同學的愛和朋友的愛都要寫齊。

2. 詞數(shù)90詞左右，不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名

參考詞匯： receive love； get on ...with； chat online;

There is lots of love around me in my everyday life.

Answer 1

【答案】Love Around Me

There is lots of love around me in my everyday life. Every day I can receive love from my parents, my teachers, my classmates and my friends. In the morning, my lovely mother cooks delicious food for me. Then my father drives me to school. At school all the teachers not only look after me well but also teach me lots of useful knowledge. My dear classmates and I study together happily, getting on well with each other. I chat online with friends in my spare time. They often share my pleasure and trouble. I often feel happy and excited when I get love from them. I make a decision to study hard and make great progress. Here, I should say to them, “Thank you for all your love.”

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，以“Love Around Me（我身邊的愛）”為題，寫一篇短文。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：There is……., Every day I can……, my lovely mother cooks……, I chat online with……, I make a decision to……, I should…….等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。