Question

17．假如你是李華．你家離學(xué)校15公里，你每月坐公共汽車回一次家，從學(xué)校到家需要20分鐘．你有一個(gè)非常要好的朋友，他/她比你大三個(gè)月，但你卻比他/她高，你們兩人都擅長(zhǎng)英語．你們將去北京度假．你最近交了一位加拿大筆友Jack．現(xiàn)請(qǐng)你寫一封E-mail向筆友Jack介紹上述情況，注意：
1E-mail 應(yīng)包含上述內(nèi)容，但不要逐條翻譯．2 詞數(shù)為80左右．3E-mail的開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好．
Dear Jack，
I am very happy to write to you．My name is Li Hua．I am a student．My home is 15 kilometers away from the school，I take the bus back home once a month，it takes me 20 minutes to school．I have a very good friend，her name is WangFang．We are in the same class，she is 3 months older than me but I am taller than her，both of us are good at English．We often do to school together and wealways help each other．We will go to Beijing for vacation this summmer because there are many places of interest．Would you like to join us？
                                    Yours，Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
it takes me 20 minutes to school 我花20分鐘上學(xué)．it takes sb．some time to do sth．花費(fèi)某人時(shí)間某事．
高分句型二
We will go to Beijing for vacation this summmer because there are many places of interest我們將去北京度假，因?yàn)橛性S多名勝古跡．這是because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句，因?yàn)椤��?/p>

解答 Dear Jack，
I am very happy to write to you．My home is 15 kilometers away from the school，I take the bus back home once a month，it takes me 20 minutes to school．【高分句型一，注意it takes sb．some time to do sth．的使用】【要點(diǎn)一，簡(jiǎn)要介紹自己】I have a very good friend，her name is WangFang．We are in the same class，she is 3 months older than me but I am taller than her，both of us are good at English．We often do to school together and we always help each other．【要點(diǎn)二，簡(jiǎn)要介紹朋友】We will go to Beijing for vacation this summmer because there are many places of interest【高分句型二，注意狀語從句的使用】．Would you like to join us？【要點(diǎn)三，簡(jiǎn)要介紹暑假計(jì)劃】
Yours，
Li Hua．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．