Question

Writing 10(2011 清遠(yuǎn))

A.信息歸納

    請閱讀下面這篇文章，根據(jù)所提供的信息，完成下面表格。

    Last Tuesday,a little girl died after eating some fried chicken. Her father bought the chicken for her from a street seller in Fenzhuang Village,Fengtai,Beijing. After testing the girl,the doctor said she was poisoned (中毒) by nitrites (亞硝酸鹽) .Some experts suggest that we should buy foods with QS signs.They are safer.

    After hearing about the accident,many people feel more worried about the food safety because there have been many food safety probems in our country these years. For example,poisonous (有毒的) rice,oil,milk and so on have been found out recently. People feel quite afraid because these poisonous foods are rather bad for their health and even kill them.They want the government to do something to stop such poisonous foods and drinks appearing again so that they can have safe and healthy foods and drinks.

                          Information Card

l.The little girl died after she ate       .

2. Some experts suggest that we sh ould buy foods with      .

3. Many people feel   about the food safety after hearing about the accident.

4.The poisonous foods are       for people’s health and even kill them.

5.The people want      to stop such poisonous foods and drinks appearing again.

B. 書面表達(dá)

     現(xiàn)在，食品安全是人們關(guān)注和擔(dān)心的一個問題，我們怎樣才能夠確保安全飲食呢？請你以“Eating Safely”為題就以下問題發(fā)表你的見解：1.在哪里就餐？ 2.如何烹飪食物？ 3.購買怎樣的食品？

[寫作要求]   全文80詞左右，文中至少列舉2〜3點(diǎn)建議。

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  

Answer 1

Writing 10

A. 信息歸納

[語篇解讀]本文是一篇新聞報道。一個小女孩的死亡，使人們更加 擔(dān)心食品安全，民眾呼吁政府采取措施加強(qiáng)食品安全。

1. some fried chicken 由文章首句可知，這個小女孩是由于吃fried chicken而死亡的。

2. QS signs由第一段結(jié)尾可知，要買具有食品質(zhì)量合格檢測標(biāo)志的食品。

3. more worried 由文章第二段首句feel more worried可知，人們對食品 安全更加擔(dān)憂了。

4. rather bad由文章最后一'段倒數(shù)第二句... because these poisonous foods are rather bad for their health…可知，應(yīng)該是 rather bad。

5. the government由文章最后一句可知，應(yīng)該是人們想讓政府阻止有 毒的食品飲料再次出現(xiàn)。

B. 書面表達(dá) [寫作要點(diǎn)]

1. 本文是一篇說明文。要寫的內(nèi)容是飲食安全的注意事項(xiàng)，所以 可能用到一般現(xiàn)在時，要注意文章的條理性。

2. 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

  ① 在哪兒飲食最安全。

  ② 怎樣烹飪食物。

  ③ 購買什么樣的食品是安全的。

[參考范文]

                             Eating Safely 

     Nowadays,many people are more and more worried about the food safety because there have been many food safety problems in the world.How to eat safely? Here are my suggestions.

     First,we’d better eat at home and try not to eat outside. Second,we should cook the foods properly because some uncooked foods are not good for us. Third,it’s safer to buy foods with QS signs because there’s always something wrong with most of the foods without QS signs.

     If you can follow these suggestions,! think you can eat healthily.