Question

7．Write a passage of at least 60words on the topic‘A（An）unforgettableexperience'．（以《一次…的經(jīng)歷》為題，寫一片不少于60個單詞的短文，標點符號不占格，題目補充完整）
（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分．）
The following points are for your reference：（所給提示僅供參考）
1What kind of experience did you have？
2When and where did it happen？
3What happened to you？
4How did you feel？

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
A policeman saw me and asked me what happened．
這句話中"what happened"為賓語從句，這句話意為：一位警察看見我并且問我發(fā)生了什么．
高分句型二：
I was so happy that I cried again．
句中用到了"so…that…如此…以致于…"結(jié)構(gòu)，這句話意為：我是如此的高興，以致于我又哭了．

解答 An unforgettable experience
It happened six years ago．On a summer vacation，my father took me to Beijing．In the morning，we went to the Great Wall and the Summer Palace．I was very happy．And then in the afternoon，we went shopping．But the shops were too crowded．After I had fun seeing the toys，I couldn't find my father!I was very sad and cried loudly．A policeman saw me and asked me what happened．（高分句型一）I told him．Then he took me to the police station．Half an hour later，my father came．I was so happy that I cried again．（高分句型二）【事情經(jīng)過】
From then on，I always followed my father or mother when we went shopping，because I was afraid of being lost again．【感受】

點評 寫作文時要注意平時語言的積累，避免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤，寫作時注意條理清楚，語意通暢．