Question

文段表達(dá)。

根據(jù)中文提示和英文書信內(nèi)容，寫一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的回信，信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，其字?jǐn)?shù)不計(jì)入所完成的回信內(nèi)。請(qǐng)不要寫出你的姓名和學(xué)校。

假設(shè)你叫楊洋。是加拿大中學(xué)生Paula的筆友，下面是你收到的她的電子郵件。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)她來(lái)信的內(nèi)容寫一封回信。針對(duì)她的問(wèn)題，談?wù)勀愕?B>看法，同時(shí)提出一些幫助她解決問(wèn)題的建議。

　　I can understand your feeling．But I don’t think it is right for you to do things like that．Don’t worry．Here are some suggestions for you．

　　As a student, it’s important for you to study hard to get more knowledge．So I think doing homework is necessary and useful．You should do your homework first．If it is not too late, you can play computer games for a while．Remember to go to bed as early as possible, then you won’t feel tired the next day．

　　In class, you need to listen to the teachers carefully and take notes．What’s more, it’s important to take part in class activities, try to answer at least two questions each class．When you have any problems, ask your teachers or classmates for help．I ’m sure you’ll make great progress and pass the final exam．Good luck!

　　Dear Paula：

　　I’m sorry to hear you are in trouble now．__________________ I believe if you work hard you’ll make some progress．Good luck!

yours Paula

Dear Paula,

Yours,

Yang yang

Answer 1

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解析：

　　One possible version：

　　I’m sorry to hear you are in trouble now．I can understand your feeling．But I don’t think it is right for you to do things like that．Don’t worry．Here are some suggestions for you：

　　As a student, it’s important for you to study hard to get more knowledge．So I think doing homework is necessary and useful．You should do your homework first．If it is not too late, you can play computer games for a while．Remember to go to bed as early as possible, then you won’t feel tired the next day．

　　In class, you need to listen to the teachers carefully and take notes．What’s more, it’s important to take part in class activities, try to answer at least two questions each class．If you have any problems, ask your teachers or classmates for help．I ’m sure you’ll make great progress and pass the final exam．Good luck!

　　書面表達(dá)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

　　第一檔：(15-13分)

　　完全符合題目要求，內(nèi)容完整、豐富、健康。使用多種句型結(jié)構(gòu)和豐富的詞匯。語(yǔ)言通順，語(yǔ)意連貫，表達(dá)清楚，具有邏輯性。

　　第二檔：(12-9分)

　　基本符合題目要求，內(nèi)容基本完整。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯基本滿足文章需要。語(yǔ)言基本通順，語(yǔ)意基本連貫，表達(dá)基本清楚。雖然有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，但不影響整體理解。

　　第三檔：(8-5分)

　　部分內(nèi)容符合題目要求，內(nèi)容不夠完整。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯錯(cuò)誤較多，語(yǔ)言不通順，表達(dá)不夠清楚，影響整體理解。

　　第四檔：(4-0分)

　　與題目有關(guān)的內(nèi)容不多，只能簡(jiǎn)單拼湊提示詞語(yǔ)，所寫內(nèi)容難以理解。