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9．為了提升無錫城市形象，市政府投入了大量的物力財力建造了地鐵．如今無錫地鐵通車將近一年，請你用英文寫一篇報道，簡述一下一年來地鐵的運(yùn)行情況及乘坐地鐵的注意事項(xiàng)．
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：
1．無錫地鐵（Wuxi Underground）已投入運(yùn)行將近一年，很多人習(xí)慣乘地鐵出行；
2．這有助于減少環(huán)境污染，路面交通也不像以前那么擁擠；
3．但是，有些乘客不遵守地鐵規(guī)定，這不利于地鐵的發(fā)展；
4．在乘坐地鐵時，…；
5．在大家的努力下，無錫地鐵將會更快、更干凈、更安全．
注意事項(xiàng)：1．報道必須包括所給要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順，意思連貫；
2．第4點(diǎn)須用2-3句話展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3．詞數(shù)90個左右；
4．報道內(nèi)容必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上．

Wuxi Underground has been in use for nearly one year．Many people are used to going by underground．This helps reduce the environment pollution．There is also less traffic on the road than before．However，some passengers don't obey rules of the underground．It's not good for the development of Wuxi Underground．When we take the underground，we shouldn't eat or drink anything．We shouldn't drop litter everywhere，either．We should queue for our turn，even in the rush hour．Wuxi Underground will be faster，cleaner and safer with everyone's effort．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是簡述一下無錫一年來地鐵的運(yùn)行情況及乘坐地鐵的注意事項(xiàng)．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．無錫地鐵已投入運(yùn)行將近一年，很多人習(xí)慣乘地鐵出行；
2．這有助于減少環(huán)境污染，路面交通也不像以前那么擁擠；
3．但是，有些乘客不遵守地鐵規(guī)定，這不利于地鐵的發(fā)展；
4．在乘坐地鐵時，…；
5．在大家的努力下，無錫地鐵將會更快、更干凈、更安全．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
be used to doing 習(xí)慣于…
obey rules遵守規(guī)則
be good for 對…有利
drop litter 丟垃圾
【高分句型】
1．①When we②take the underground，we shouldn't eat ③or drink anything．
①when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句
②take the underground乘坐地鐵
③or放在否定句中．
2．Wuxi Underground will be ①faster，cleaner and safer②with everyone's effort．
①比較級的運(yùn)用．
②with短語做狀語，表方式．

解答 Wuxi Underground has been in use for nearly one year．Many people are used to going by underground．（無錫地鐵已投入運(yùn)行將近一年，很多人習(xí)慣乘地鐵出行；）This helps reduce the environment pollution．There is also less traffic on the road than before．（這有助于減少環(huán)境污染，路面交通也不像以前那么擁擠）However，some passengers don't obey rules of the underground．It's not good for the development of Wuxi Underground．（有些乘客不遵守地鐵規(guī)定，這不利于地鐵的發(fā)展）When we take the underground，we shouldn't eat or drink anything．【高分句型】We shouldn't drop litter everywhere，either．We should queue for our turn，even in the rush hour．（乘坐地鐵時不要吃或者喝任何東西，不要亂扔垃圾，要排隊(duì)等候）Wuxi Underground will be faster，cleaner and safer with everyone's effort．【高分句型】（在大家的努力下，無錫地鐵將會更快、更干凈、更安全）

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