Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

根據(jù)下列表格的提示, 寫(xiě)一篇題為Changes in Our Hometown的英語(yǔ)短文。（80詞左右）文章內(nèi)容必須包含所給的所有信息。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

根據(jù)下列表格的提示, 寫(xiě)一篇題為Changes in Our Hometown的英語(yǔ)短文。（80詞左右）

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):

過(guò)去	現(xiàn)在
1.舊房	1.高樓
2.河水骯臟	2.河水清澈(clean and clear).
3.步行、騎自行車(chē)上班	3.乘公交車(chē)、小汽車(chē)上班
4.道路狹窄(narrow).	4.街道寬闊(wide)，干凈整潔
5.居住條件（living conditions）差	5.生活越來(lái)越好，環(huán)境（environment）越來(lái)越舒適。
	6 你的感想 ……（寫(xiě)兩到三句）

In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.

Answer 1

【答案】Changes in Our Hometown

In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.

I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們用英文來(lái)描述家鄉(xiāng)的變化，并用上表格中所給的信息。學(xué)生在寫(xiě)的過(guò)程中可能會(huì)有不會(huì)拼寫(xiě)的單詞或句意表達(dá)不暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】1. 本文緊扣要求對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)做了簡(jiǎn)單介紹，內(nèi)容完整，用了表格中的信息。2. 句式豐富。表述靈活。文章對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)的不同的前后變化進(jìn)行比較時(shí)，銜接自然，順暢。并沒(méi)有刻意的使用以前、現(xiàn)在等詞語(yǔ)進(jìn)行生硬的對(duì)比。