Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（15分）

三年初中學(xué)習(xí)生活即將結(jié)束，請(qǐng)以“My Middle School Life”為題寫一篇80個(gè)詞左右的短文，回顧自己的中學(xué)生活。

提示：1. 剛進(jìn)入初中的時(shí)候?qū)W習(xí)不夠努力、學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)不好。

2. 在老師和同學(xué)的幫助下各方面進(jìn)步很大，對(duì)英語也有興趣了。

3. 后來還參加了學(xué)校的籃球俱樂部和英語俱樂部并學(xué)到很多東西。

4. 以后的打算。

5. ·····

Answer 1

【答案】

My Middle School Life

How time flies!It’s not long before we graduate from our junior high school. Now let me tell you something about my middle school life.

Three years ago, when I first went into junior high school, I didn’t work hard and I always got bad grades. My parents got angry with me, my teachers worried about me. And I often felt sad. When I was in Grate 8, with the help of my teachers and classmates, I made much progress. I did well in my study. What’s more, I got interested in studying English. Later I joined the school basketball club and the English club. I was not only happy but also learned a lot in the clubs.

Several months later, I will be in senior high school. I can’t believe how the time went by! When I get into the senior high school, I will study harder and join the swimming team. I want to make my parents and teachers proud of me. And I believe I can do it.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的學(xué)校生活。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)。注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了作者剛進(jìn)初中時(shí)候的學(xué)習(xí)情況，接下來介紹和同學(xué)的相處情況，最后參加學(xué)校的各種活動(dòng)及將來的打算。此處用了I made much progress. I did well in my study；I can’t believe how the time went by等這些句子的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。