Question

【題目】 每個人都有自己崇拜的偶像(idol),原因也各不相同。請根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容,以“Who is the idol in my heart”為題,寫一篇100詞左右的英語作文。

一些人	明星	年輕,漂亮,時尚,能歌善舞,多金
一些人	科學家	知識淵博,在一些重要領(lǐng)域為國家作出巨大貢獻
一些人	醫(yī)生	不顧個人安危,保護我們的生命和健康
我	……	……

要求：

1）表達清楚,語法正確,上下連貫；

2）必須包括所有相關(guān)信息,并作適當發(fā)揮；

3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)）；

4）不使用真實姓名和校名等。

Who is the idol in my heart?

Everyone has an idol in his heart. Different people have different reasons for it._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】例文：

Who is the idol in my heart?

Everyone has an idol in his heart. Different people have different reasons for it.

Some people admire actors or singers, because they are young, good-looking and dress fashionably. In addition, they can sing, dance or act well. They earn a lot of money so easily that many teenagers admire them very much. Some people admire scientists, because they have rich knowledge. They are experienced in their own field. They make contributions to our country’s science and technology. Others think doctors are their idols, because they protect our health or lives. Some of them even lost their lives. For example, when the novel corona virus broke out in Wuhan, a lot of doctors gave up their own family and did what they could to save the patients when they were needed.

As for me, I think my idol is my teachers. They devote themselves to teaching us. They often come to school ahead of us, and are the last to leave school. They spend much time preparing lessons in order that we could learn better. After classes, they are busy correcting our homework. They treat us as if we were their own children. I want to be a teacher when I grow up

【解析】

1. 題干解讀：文章是一篇話題作文。主要以“Who is the idol in my heart”為主題展開描寫，結(jié)合題目中給的表格信息描寫不同的人有不同的偶像以及原因，同時要補充表格中自己的偶像以及原因，要注意文章的層次感，文中多使用第三人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時描寫，要注意語言的準確性。