Question

15．你的英國(guó)朋友Steve未經(jīng)允許在他爸爸的電腦上玩游戲?qū)е码娔X中毒，Steve心里害怕，不敢向爸爸說(shuō)，因此寫信向你求助．請(qǐng)你以Diana的名義根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示給Steve寫一封回信．
提示：
1．指出Steve的兩點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤；
2．最好立即向爸爸說(shuō)出實(shí)情；
3．建議Steve幫爸爸做些事，以彌補(bǔ)過(guò)錯(cuò)．
要求：
1．詞數(shù)80詞左右；
2．短文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名和校名等信息；
3．開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)．
Dear Steve，
Thanks for thinking of me at this time．I think you have made two mistakes．One is you used your father's computer without his permission．The other is that you made the computer get virus．Since you have made mistakes，
you must come up with ways to correct them．First of all，you had better tell him the truth immediately．Maybe he will be angry with you．But you
can do something to make him happy．For example，you can volunteer to do some housework or help your father clean his car．At last，tell him you
will not make the same mistake next time．
Oh，and next time，play basketball with your Dad!
Best wishes，
Diana．

Answer 1

分析 本題是一篇回信，寫作時(shí)要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1．內(nèi)容要齊全（指出他的兩點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤；建議他向爸爸承認(rèn)錯(cuò)誤；為爸爸做點(diǎn)事情）2．寫作時(shí)時(shí)態(tài)轉(zhuǎn)換要注意，指出錯(cuò)誤時(shí)，用一般過(guò)去時(shí)；提出建議，用一般將來(lái)時(shí)．3．注意情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的使用．

解答 Dear Steve，
Thanks for thinking of me at this time．I think you have made two mistakes．One is you used your father's computer without his permission．The other is that you made the computer get virus．Since you have made mistakes，you must come up with ways to correct them．First of all，you had better tell him the truth immediately．Maybe he will be angry with you．But you can do something to make him happy．For example，you can volunteer to do some housework or help your father clean his car．At last，tell him you will not make the same mistake next time．
Oh，and next time，play basketball with your Dad!
Best wishes，
Diana．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是一篇以提綱提供情景的作文，要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱的要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)，要注意時(shí)態(tài)的選擇，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式的變化．另外，還需要使用一些句型和短語(yǔ)，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢．