Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

時(shí)光荏苒，初中三年轉(zhuǎn)瞬即逝。跟三年前的自己相比較，你會有很多變化。請以“I have changed a lot!”為題，根據(jù)以下要求與提示，用英語寫一篇短文，具體描述你最重要的變化及其如何發(fā)生的。

要求：

l. 短文不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分；

2.不少于60詞。

提示：

l. What did you use to be like?

2. What is the most important change?

3. And how did it happen? Tell a story about it.

I have changed a lot!

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Answer 1

【答案】Great changes have happened to me during the past three years. The most important change is my attitude to English.

I used to be tired of learning English. And I was not interested in it. I couldn’t remember the words freely or pronounce them correctly. Thanks to my mother, she often encourages me to learn it. Besides, with the help of my English teacher, I find a better way to learn English. I read it every morning. I listen to her carefully in class, take grammar notes. I often ask my classmates for help.

Now I like English so much that it is my favorite subject. Seeing the great change in my English study, how happy I am!

【解析】

本文要寫我初中三年的變化，根據(jù)習(xí)作提示，首先要指出我最大的變化是什么，并描述出具體變化是怎么發(fā)生的，所以要針對自己某一個(gè)最大的變化來寫，而不是泛泛地寫很多變化；時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。本篇文章，首先開篇點(diǎn)題，我有很多變化，我最大的變化是我對待英語學(xué)習(xí)態(tài)度的變化。第二段是文章的主體，先描述過去學(xué)習(xí)英語的狀況，其中用到表達(dá)過去常用的句型used to do ;在媽媽及老師的幫助下，我的英語學(xué)習(xí)發(fā)生了很大變化，具體表現(xiàn)為I read it every morning. I listen to her carefully in class, take grammar notes. I often ask my classmates for help.等。最后對以上變化進(jìn)行總結(jié)，并指出對于這個(gè)變化，我的心情如何，Seeing the great change in my English study, how happy I am! 整篇文章內(nèi)容符合要求，時(shí)態(tài)用云正確，思路清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，是一篇不錯的文章。