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16．Life is just like a mirror，you smile at it，and it smiles at you，too．請你以"Learn to Smile"為題，根據(jù)下表所列的要點寫一篇100詞左右的文章（文章開頭已給出）．

學會對自己微笑	1、面對困難與煩惱學會微笑（考試失利、被別人誤解等）． 2、使你自信，擊敗你的人有時就是你自己．3、有益于身心健康．
學會對他人微笑	1、便于與他人之間的交流． 2、給別人帶來快樂，自己也快樂．
微笑是一種語言	人人都能懂，傳遞友誼，拉近距離．

1、參考詞匯：對某人微笑  smile at sb．誤解 misunderstand
2、短文必須包括所有內容要點，不要逐字翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順．
Learn to Smile
I remember a song by Westlife，the first sentence of it is"Just a smile and the rain is gone．"Do you like smiling？I think you should learn to smile．
First，learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life．If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends，don't be sad．Just smile at yourself．Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence．Sometimes the one who beats you is not others，but yourself．And smile can also keep you healthy．Second，learn to smile at others．It will make you communicate better with people．Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well．
In a word，smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone．It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people．Living with a smile，every day will be shiny．．

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分析 本篇作文為圖表給出寫作大綱的提綱作文．體裁為議論文．內容為Learn to Smile"為題，根據(jù)表格所列的要點，指出微笑的重要性，并要求我們不僅學會對自己微笑，還要學會對別人微笑．時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱為第一人稱，可穿插使用第二人稱．寫作要點包括：1．學會對自己微笑；2．學會對別人微笑；3．微笑的重要性．常用到的重點句型和短語：smile at sb．misunderstand，pass love and friendship；helps shorten the distance between you and other people

解答 Learn to Smile                                   
I remember a song by Westlife，the first sentence of it is"Just a smile and the rain is gone．"
Do you like smiling？I think you should learn to smile．First，learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life．If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends，don't be sad．Just smile at yourself．Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence．Sometimes the one who beats you is not others，but yourself．And smile can also keep you healthy．Second，learn to smile at others．It will make you communicate better with people．Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well．
In a word，smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone．It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people．Living with a smile，every day will be shiny．

點評 這是一篇作文思路非常清晰的提綱類作文．考生在作文時需注意表格中的要點要全部囊括在自己的作文中．文章條理要清晰，適當?shù)氖褂胒irst，second，third等序數(shù)詞來表示順序，并能夠正確的表述出自己的觀點．注意行文的流暢，盡量避免語法和詞匯的錯誤．