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【題目】我國(guó)不少城市正在推廣公共自行車，提倡人們“綠色出行，低碳生活”。在漳州，越來(lái)越多的市民選擇公共自行車出行。自行車給人們的出行帶來(lái)了便利，但也出現(xiàn)了一些問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的圖表, 寫一篇80個(gè)詞左右的短文，談?wù)勍茝V公共自行車的好處和存在的問(wèn)題及你的愿望。
要求：語(yǔ)篇連貫，邏輯清晰，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)流暢。

好處	1)、停車方便
	2)、節(jié)約能源，環(huán)保
	3)、租或還都很快捷，花費(fèi)少
	4)、…
問(wèn)題	1)、亂停放
	2)、不愛(ài)護(hù)自行車
愿望	…

Now, public bikes are provided for people in many cities in China. In Zhangzhou, you can also find a lot of bikes around us.

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version：

Now puplic bikes are provided for people in many cities in China. In Zhangzhou, you can also find a lot of bikes around us. More and more people like going out by bike these days. There are many reasons. First, it's easy to park bikes wherever you go. Second, cycling can save energy and it doesn't cause air pollution. It's good for our environment. Third, it's very easy to rent and return bikes and it costs only a little. What's more, cycling can help us keep healthy.

On the other hand, some of us park bikes in the wrong place. Even worse, some people don't care for the public bikes. I hope more and more people can choose the bikes to go out and protect them well.

【解析】這篇短文要求我們以公共自行車為線索，寫一篇關(guān)于與環(huán)保相關(guān)的作文。題目中已經(jīng)規(guī)定了這篇短文的寫作提綱，主要包括兩個(gè)部分。一個(gè)是關(guān)于推廣公共自行車的優(yōu)勢(shì)，一個(gè)是闡述一下自己的愿望。關(guān)于使用公共自行車的優(yōu)勢(shì)，提綱中具體列出了三點(diǎn)，自己需要列出第四點(diǎn)優(yōu)勢(shì)。最后，自己還要寫出關(guān)于公共自行車推廣或者對(duì)整個(gè)環(huán)保工作的愿望。因此，本篇作文，不僅要考慮到如何準(zhǔn)確生動(dòng)的表達(dá)出已列出的觀點(diǎn)，還要表達(dá)出自己的想法。寫作時(shí)，需注意語(yǔ)句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。