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17．假設(shè)你是某學(xué)生雜志社的編輯Diana，收到了讀者Steve的一封來信，信中傾訴了他目前的煩惱．請根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，給Steve寫一封回信．

與人交流	課上參與小組討論，表達(dá)自己的想法；課間和同學(xué)交談
表達(dá)善意	主動(dòng)問候同學(xué)；對同學(xué)友好；幫助同學(xué)
參加活動(dòng)	積極參加班級活動(dòng)（如運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)、歌詠比賽等）

參考詞匯：小組討論group work 表達(dá)想法 express one's ideas
要求：1．詞數(shù)：100詞左右．
2．要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
Dear Diana，
I just came to a new school．And I can't get on well with my new classmates．What should I do？
Steve
Dear Steve，
I'velearnedaboutyourproblems．Ithink you should be active in group work in class andbe brave enough to express your ideas．Try to talk with your classmates at break．If you want to get on well with your classmates，don't forget to say hello when you meet them．Being friendly and helpful is also very important．You need to take part in all kinds of class activities，such as sports meetings，football games and singing competitions．I'm sure you ll soon be popularamong friends．
Best wishes，
Diana．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇表格類提綱作文．內(nèi)容是寫一封回信，給朋友提怎樣和同學(xué)相處好的建議．注意信件的格式．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第二人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1與人交流：課上參與小組討論，表達(dá)自己的想法；課間和同學(xué)交談
2表達(dá)善意：主動(dòng)問候同學(xué)；對同學(xué)友好；幫助同學(xué)
3．參加活動(dòng)：積極參加班級活動(dòng)（如：運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)、歌詠比賽等）
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
be active in 積極參與
try to do sth盡力做某事
get on with sb與…相處
forget to do sth忘記去做某事
take part in參加
such as例如
【高分句型】
1．I think①you should be active in group work in class and be ②brave enough to express your ideas．
①that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，作為think的賓語，that省略．
②adj/adv+enough+to do sth足夠怎么樣去做某事
brave enough to express your ideas足夠勇敢去表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)．（enough修飾形容詞）
He didn't run fast enough to catch the train．他跑得不夠快，沒趕上火車（他跑得不夠快以至于沒趕上火車）．（enough修飾副詞 fast）
2．①If you want to get on well with your classmates，don't forget to say hello ②when you meet them．
①if引導(dǎo)的是條件狀語從句，主句是祈使句，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)代替一般將來時(shí)．
②when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句，意為當(dāng)…的時(shí)候．
3．Being friendly and helpful is also very important．
動(dòng)名詞短語做主語，謂語動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)is．

解答 Dear Steve，
I've learned about your problems．I think you should be active in group work in class and be brave enough to express your ideas．【高分句型】Try to talk with your classmates at break．If you want to get on well with your classmates，don't forget to say hello when you meet them【高分句型】（與人交流）Being friendly and helpful is also very important．【高分句型】（表達(dá)善意）You need to take part in all kinds of class activities，such as sports meetings，football games and singing competitions．（參加活動(dòng)）I'm sure you'll soon be popular among friends．
Best wishes，
Diana

點(diǎn)評 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封回信．本題材料主要是一封來信，故動(dòng)筆前一定要認(rèn)真閱讀來信．在回信中對涉及的問題都要有所回應(yīng)．根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．寫作中注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤．注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫．
注意寫作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多．寫作中語言要準(zhǔn)確、簡明，說明有條理，符合邏輯．