Question

Writing 5(2014 南京)

假如你是來(lái)自英國(guó)某中學(xué)的交換生Daniel ,你想?yún)⒓佑⑽膱?bào) 紙《Jinling Daily》廣告中介紹的機(jī)器人培訓(xùn)班。

請(qǐng)根據(jù)該廣告內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，詢問(wèn)與該班相關(guān)的具體信息，郵件內(nèi)容須包括：

1. 培訓(xùn)班的kith司hkk末是否上課;

2. 參觀機(jī)器人公司的具體安排；

3. 你還想了解的該培訓(xùn)班其他信息。

注意：

1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；

2. 語(yǔ)言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；

3. 詞數(shù)80左右，郵件的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)人總 詞數(shù)。

Dear Sir/Madam,

    I’m writing to ask for information about the robot course for beginners at Starlight School.

                      Yours faithfully,                            Daniel

Answer 1

Writing 5 [寫(xiě)作提示]

1. 審題:本文是一封電子郵件，詢問(wèn)與培訓(xùn)班相關(guān)的具體信息，用 一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。詢問(wèn)需用疑問(wèn)句形式。

2. 確定要點(diǎn)：

(1) 培訓(xùn)班的起止時(shí)間以及周末是否上課；

(2) 參觀機(jī)器人公司的具體安排；

(3) 其他想了解的信息。

3.參考詞匯：course arrangement課程安排 [參考范文]

Dear Sir/Madam ,

    I'm writing to ask for information about the robot course for beginners at Starlight School.

    Firstly,Fd like to know more about the course arrangement.Could you tell me how long the course will last I prefer to know if there is any class for the weekend.Next,I hope to visit Friendly Robots Company.Would you tell me whether I need to pay for it? Finally,I wonder whether Fll be able to design a robot myself at the end of the course.

    Thank you for your time and I look forward to hearing from you soon.

                                           Yours faithfully,

                                                  Daniel