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4．假如你是王寧，4月15日，你參加了學(xué)校組織的水滸城旅游活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)以"My Day in Shuihu Town"為題，寫(xiě)出當(dāng)天的經(jīng)歷．（注：你可以參考有關(guān)內(nèi)容提示，也可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）
（一）內(nèi)容提示：
1．充當(dāng)義務(wù)小導(dǎo)游，向外國(guó)游客介紹水滸文化；
2．協(xié)助水滸城的管理員，制止游客不文明的行為；
3．幫助走失的孩子尋找家人．
（二）詞語(yǔ)提示：scenery spot景點(diǎn)；foreign tourists外國(guó)游客；introduce Shuihu culture 介紹水滸文化；throw litter here and there亂丟垃圾；a lost child 走失的孩子
（三）詞數(shù)要求：100詞左右（首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．

Answer 1

分析 本篇作文是記敘一次旅行，應(yīng)該以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主要時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作，其中要點(diǎn)要包括：1．交代好旅行的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)．2．寫(xiě)出當(dāng)天的經(jīng)歷（做導(dǎo)游，制止游客不文明行為，幫助孩子找家人）3．感受如何或者是有什么收獲．可以分成三段來(lái)敘述經(jīng)歷，這幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)要敘述清楚，也可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．

解答 My Day in Shuihu Town
Today is April 15th．I went to Shuihu Town for an English school trip．
There were so many people in Shuihu Town．Among them were some foreign tourists．I went up to them，said hello and introduced Shuihu culture to them．They were very interested and thanked me．
After that，when we visited some scenery spots．We were sorry to find that some tourists threw litter here and there and drew on the walls．So we helped the managers to stop them．
At noon，we had a quick meal．In the afternoon，before we left，I found a lost boy crying alone，so I took him to the
manager's office．With the help of the manager，the boy found his parents at last．
What a day!We were all very busy and tired the whole day，but we were happy．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 以提綱提供情景的作文．要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語(yǔ)法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會(huì)造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱的要點(diǎn)．行文間要注意簡(jiǎn)化描述，用簡(jiǎn)短的語(yǔ)句代替冗長(zhǎng)的語(yǔ)句．在作文完成的時(shí)候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)．寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要先確定好時(shí)態(tài)，再注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式的變化．另外，還需要使用一些句型和短語(yǔ)，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢．