Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

介紹我的家鄉(xiāng):

1. 我的家鄉(xiāng)陽(yáng)山鎮(zhèn)，是一個(gè)非常安靜又美麗的小鎮(zhèn)，這兒的空氣清新。

2. 在這里有許多事情可以做。可以……

3. 能住在這樣一個(gè)鎮(zhèn)上，真是幸運(yùn)的。

注：1. 第二個(gè)要點(diǎn)要求用2-3句話發(fā)揮合理的想象。

2. 全文字?jǐn)?shù)在70詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

I live in Yangshan Town. It is a very quiet and beautiful town. The air is fresh here. There are a lot of things to do, such as walking in the park, hearing the birds sing and smelling the flowers.The Chinese restaurants are all over the place, and I can have Chinese food better. At the weekend, I often see a film in the local cinema. Sometimes I row a boat with my friends on the lake. I enjoy my life here. It is lucky to live here. Welcome to my hometown.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的家鄉(xiāng)陽(yáng)山鎮(zhèn)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)為單數(shù)第一，三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：It is…，There are…，The Chinese restaurants are…，and I can have…，I often see a film…，I enjoy…等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后邀請(qǐng)大家到我的家鄉(xiāng)來(lái)玩。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我的家鄉(xiāng)的名字，接下來(lái)介紹我的家鄉(xiāng)的空氣、我經(jīng)常做的事、食物，最后表示自己喜歡生活在這里，并歡迎大家來(lái)這里玩。此處a lot of, such as, hear sb do sth, all over, at the weekend, see a film, row a boat, be lucky to do sth, welcome to等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。