Question

4．每年六月的第三個星期天是父親節(jié)，請你以"My father"為題目，寫一篇短文．從性格、愛好等方面簡略介紹一下你的父親，重點寫一個曾經(jīng)發(fā)生在你們之間的令人感動的故事，并簡要說明你將如何回報這如山的父愛．
注意：1．短文條理清楚，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；
2．能使用常見的連接詞表示順序和邏輯關系；
3．詳略得當；
4．短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名；
5．詞數(shù)80詞左右．
參考詞匯：感動 move（v．）　　回報 in return（adv．）

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I hope he'll be healthy and happy forever我希望他會永遠健康快樂．
hope后是省略that的賓語從句．
【高分句型二】
And I'll ①make greater progress ②in return．
①make progress 取得進步
②in return：作為回報．

解答 One possible version：
My father
My father is a teacher，my most respectful person in the world．He's not very tall，but he is friendly．He's outgoing and energetic．
In his spare time，he likes reading all kinds of books，and keeping doing exercise every day．He leads a healthy life，and he never smokes or drinks．（介紹父親）
When I was young，I used to fall ill．Every time I was ill in hospital，he looked after me all day and all night without any rest．（令人感動的故事）I was moved deeply by his great love．
Father's Day is coming．I hope he'll be healthy and happy forever【高分句型一】．And I'll make greater progress in return．【高分句型二】（如何回報）

點評 本題是一篇提綱作文，寫作內(nèi)容較為開放，寫作時，首先要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性，還需要使用一些句型和短語，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達流暢．