Question

17．生活中、學(xué)習(xí)中，父母的關(guān)愛、老師的付出，朋友的幫助成就了今天的你，讓你走；
境走向成功．此時此刻你一定有很多感謝的話要說．根據(jù)提示用英文寫一篇短文．
提示：1．感謝對象：父母，老師，朋友…．．（可選擇一個對象或多個對象來寫）．=2．感謝的原因：生活方面，學(xué)習(xí)方面…，．
3．美好祝福．
要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80-100詞之間．
（2）字跡工整，語言流暢，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，邏輯清晰．
（3）文章內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
Thanks                                        ．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
①When I②have problems with my study，they are so patient and helpful．
①when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句．
②have problems with …在某方面有困難
【高分句型二】
I will remember the days when we play and study together．
we play and study together是定語從句，修飾先行詞the days，關(guān)系詞when 作為從句狀語．

解答 Thanks
In my life，I get lots of help and love from many people．Now I want to express my thanks to them．First，I want to thank my parents．They provide a happy life for me．They do much for me and give me so much love．（感謝父母及原因）Second，I want to thank my teachers．They are always busy doing their work．When I have problems with my study，they are so patient and helpful．【高分句型一】（感謝老師及原因）Third，I want to thank my classmates．They make me feel less lonely．I will remember the days when  we play and study together．【高分句型二】（感謝同學(xué)及原因）
Thank you，my parents，my teacher and my classmates．I hope you are in good health and have a better future．（美好祝愿）

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